ENGAGED IN MUTILATING NEW SONG IDEA ( ROUGH)

ENGAGED IN MUTILATING, writing new material for their second coming album. The song is rough, and needs work, its just a foundation idea (no vox, no 2nd guitars, nor solos) We would like some feedback from the fans. . whats wrong with it is it catchy enough whats missing etc. etc. we posted this for the fans to hear. . hope yall enjoy PLEASE NO NEGATIVE COMMENTS thank you