Im no Pv P chad, so I tried my hand at making a narrative driven Rust video. Feedback appreciated, tell me what you think

This wipe, my team and I wanted to try our hand at naval domination. This is the first video of a twopart series, maybe three, who knows. Watch us noobies try to make a name for ourselves on an official vanilla server. Subscribe for more sub action, and also other things. Catch ya on the flippityflop. Music by Abstract Technology Future Design Stock Studio Action Stylish Rock Alex Grohl Beautiful Technology Coma Media Calm Before the Storm Evgeny Bardyuzha Caves of Dawn Guilherme Bernardes Coffee Chill Out Roman Belov El Gringo Kinemesis Music Epic Hollywood Trailer ZakharValaha Jazzy Abstract Beat ComaMedia The Sapphire City Leonell Cassio Let It Go ItsWatR Uncut Gems Mezhdunami Fashion Beats Coma Media Under Pressure Michael Kobrin Spirit Blossom Roman Belov