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Why you SUCK at writing: Magic Systems
To explain the thumbnail if anyone likes to read descriptions (hey btw :3) Freiren s magic system is great because they don t yap on and on about someone s powers. They show off their spell, say if the mage can imagine it, they can do it and that s it. Jujutsu Kaisen could do that, but if you re a manga reader like me, you know that no one has more dialogue than the narrator who loves to info dump about people s powers for the audience. JJKs magic system can equally be summed up as If they can imagine it, they can use their magic better. And yet often times, we are treated to walls of text describing and over explaining abilities until no one outside of a powerscaling YTer is going to care. It s bad storytelling, and I might make a video on it. Anyways, no one reads these things, I just like yapping about lobotomy kaisen. Royal Road Referral Link: My Book: Artist who drew my stills: Editor:
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