Honey I m Home, Generation Loss Animatic, PMV ( SPOILERS )

this is a school project i d really like some feedback so pls comment something you thought was cool and something you think could be improved :D id appreciate it a ton thank you if you re from my school errmm you never saw this thank youuuu song: apps used: procreate (drawing), toonsquid (editing) 1080 x 1980 24 fps i love genloss so much and i ve had this animatic idea for a while and i finally did it WAHOOO I meant to post this on the 6 month anniversary of the finale sorry its a tad late gl ranboo is very clearly my fav im so sad about them I m so excited for the next part Chronicle 0 It s going to have 3D animation AAAH, POS