Death in Space Carina Nebula

In this song we are flying through space at lightyears per second speed. Lyrics In deadlycold lifeless cosmos A tiny warm human in fragile shell Petrifies in a minute or less His corpse will forever travel in space For space a minute is nothing For space hundred years is a moment The space wont notice the minute When his body freezes to absolute zero In this music video we are flying through space using space engine simulation, approaching and passing through Carina Nebula (NGC 3372, ESO 128EN013). We can also observe a smaller redgreen nebula RN 8496279. The big galaxy that we can see on the periphery during the whole video is the Large Magellanic Cloud a Milky Way satellite galaxy. P. S. I am learning to record my guitar and mix tracks. This is my 2nd one. Maybe some opinions on Sound quality, volume levels, equalizing, stereo panning